Only twenty three!
Too much time watching TV.
Damn Fringe, Grimm, and Spy.

Mead, slaughter, wolf, run
slaughter kings, intrigue, mead run, charred meat
run, king, wolf, mead, bored

insane writing style
one catastrophic sentence
pelting me like rain

Splended beginning!
sucked me in, but I grew tired
the end felt incom

#1

simply brilliant tales
ordinary writing shines
plain is beautiful

“Grams, you look different.”
Family can be purchased.
No exchange on love.

lush, first love romance
stunning art but I got bored
End this Winter soon.

Tired of hearing:
“As blood poured over my brain.”
Eeeeesh. Still, cool, insights.

Too much of these folks
is ice cream brain freeze with words
Time for a break, Rra.

Smug, clever writing
Does this approach ever work?
main character: douche.

Love to visit them,
these good folks in Botswana
reading and red tea.